You made me laugh!
There you go, 9/10. Nice graphics, the bees were cool-looking. BTW, good job on not overdoing the joke and making it longer cause it would've have worn off the effect.
You made me laugh!
There you go, 9/10. Nice graphics, the bees were cool-looking. BTW, good job on not overdoing the joke and making it longer cause it would've have worn off the effect.
Might I say
It was just ok, or "not bad, in fact I like it" sort of thing. The only thing, it got no real plot and the guy looked rather sketchy :).
Fine
I found it to be quite fine! Yet too much routine at the beginning (I know that was what you wanted to do yet it was quite tireding for me). You animate quite smooth, especially bgs, points there. Nonetheless, I found the people's eyes a bit irritating, yet I think that's just your style. Good luck on future animations and I would suggest making a better plot to back up the nice graphics. BTW add some sound effects.
Nice animation
Dull humor
Well
The humor was ok....for a minute.... not the whole flash... and the low and high sounds were quite irritating, try keeping the sound level sort of constant.
Some advice
You need more sounds. . . the graphics are quite great yet the animation is lacking. Well try giving the characters some voices or some subs at least cause the song was just. . . loopy. that's about it
With this talent
Do something original. Yes, this looks just like the tv series. . . so why would I want to see almost the same stuff here than I would on tv. . . try being a bit more original cause the way the flash was, was just like the series. Do something more fron your ideas k?
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Music & Programming
Mexico
Joined on 3/28/04