To tell the truth
I find this to be a bit overrated. Yes, it can make people smile a bit. . . yet, comparing the score to submissions like Bitey of Brackenwood. . . I find it disturbing :S. Ok, I'll give my 'constructive criticism'
1- Graphics were ok, yet, taking in consideration you tweened all, you should've placed more detail on the characters... Taking care the clothes don't extend to places they shouldn't like the chest on joanime.
2- Animation was ok...end of story. Try some fbf, it won't hurt anyone
3- Sound was ok, but it was too high at some parts.
4- Humor...ehm try a bit more :P, it was just ok
--I just gave it a score comparing to the whole newground's quality...